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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA ![]() |
Everlasting Days It's dawn and in the east I see That God in His great artistry, Has brushed such colors in the sky, No one could paint or even try! The stars, unable to compete With rising sun, make a retreat And one by one, they douse their light. The shadows flee into the night That still remains, off to the west And following each ocean crest, Find lands where darkness slumbers still, Across each high and lasting hill. The flood of light moves through the day And reaches countries far away, To bring them what we have to share And warm the people waiting there. So night is chased from shore to shore And then returns to us once more. It is a cycle God has sent, To bless the land and firmament. Symbolic of His constant goal To chase all darkness from each soul! His love is everlasting too, A perfect gift to me and you! Betty Lou Hebert [This message has been edited by Trillium (02-13-2002 03:24 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
This is a wonderful exceptionally well written poetic jewel with a very beautiful message. Thank you for sharing it. ![]() ((Betty)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
newell: Thank you for such a great response to this poem. I'm so glad you liked it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Betty Lou, this is absolutely beautiful. Your words flow as sweet and smoothly as honey. So uplifting. Thanks for this. Cheryl |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Trillium, Exquisitely written in perfect meter... Though we can't compete with GOD's artistry, your poetry here paints a beautiful portrait of Light. Again, very good flow and word choices you've created here. GOD bless you. -Bob |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Cheryl: Thank you for your sweet remarks! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Bob: thank you for the wonderful comments. I really appreciate them. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully expressed, Betty Lou! Love it! |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Denise: Thanks for commenting. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, He is the most talented painter of all and He will always paint light in all our hearts to erase all the darkness within! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Betty, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: Thank you for taking time to read and comment. You always have such nice things to say! Betty Lou Hebert |
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