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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... ![]() |
My Father Dad, is that your voice I hear? It’s been so very long. I have missed your sweet voice only dreams, wishes and longing. Dad; I have been so, so alone home-sick since I moved away. Reading your letters over and over so many, I have worn several out. Dad; all I treasured, kept of you memories sharp, loving, bittersweet. The times we walked long, together while you taught me of your ways. Dad, will you accept another prodical is there a way for you to love me again? May I come to your house, awakened to belong, be wanted, be welcomed? Dad, oh Dad...I have misssed you so will you hug me, love me once again? Can I hope, pray for whispered love am I still yours, Abba my Father? |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Such a sweet poem to our Father. Sadly, most of us don't realize the Daddy part but it's so true. Thank you for the reminder that He longs to be our daddy. That's a comforting thought today. Cheryl |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Tramp poet, this is so wonderful. yes He would always take one back to the flock. You wrote a wonderful plea here and I know He will hear you. ![]() Floria |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
This is so very beautiful. Hurry! Go kill another fatted calf, I hear God say. Tonight we are going to Celebrate! My child was dead and now is alive. Hurry, fetch my golden sparkling diamond and ruby ring. I need it as a present. My child has come home. I hear God say! ![]() Welcome back! ![]() -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I like this resemblance to your earthly father. When I was small I pictured God as just a much larger version of my Daddy. And just as kind. Joyce |
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jfreak Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306Yuma, AZ, USA |
Good stuff...I liked the way it was suttley sweet...(if that is how you spell suttley) It was nice not having to remember what some big word meant as I was reading this. Simple and serene! J~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (tears fall down my cheeks) So very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, He will always love you and embrace you, for we are all sons and daughters of His wonderful love! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You, my heart is with you always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very touching, Daniel! Straight from the heart, as always! Love ya! |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
thanks to y'all for the comments! |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I understand longing for home. Dad will always be there waiting for you. Love you, Sis Patience is the ability to idle your motor, when you feel like stripping your gears. Author Unknown |
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