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Allstaria22
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 83
MN USA

0 posted 2001-11-23 10:26 PM


sitting in this dark room
thinking of too much
I inhale
dragging in the pollution of the world
enjoying it, almost
never knowing what I am doing
tearing a peice of me away
alone
my hand shakes as I bring it to my lips
holding on to something, anything
blocking fresh air
and so much more
beleiving the liar instead of the Truth
unable to realize that this
and so much more
is disrtoying me
where is the help
I so despratly seek
in front of me I'm sure
but the smoke blocks my sight
not allowing me to see
that You are there
standing next to me
holding all the anwsers
offering all the hope
all the love
that I need
if only I would put down
the things that distroy me
and offer it all up to You
why do I allow the world to hurt me
why do I hurt myself
by not seeing what You offer me
help me Oh Lord
to put down this that hurts me
and everything else that it could be
not just a cigarette
but everything I do
that makes You weep.

Isaiah 1:18

"Everybody loves a rose, will you be thankful for the thorns?" -All Together Seperate

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sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
1 posted 2001-11-23 11:20 PM


Cigarettes!  Another thing we think we've got 'til realizing it has us.  Even Apostle Paul said he does things he don't want to and doesn't do what he wants to do.  We're much the same.  You ask for help, admitting need in this heartfelt piece and relate to pain caused.  Very well done.
  Rae

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
2 posted 2001-11-24 11:14 AM


A very good analogy. We all have some kind of struggle. Glad there is one who is able to help us. I always like to read your poems.
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since 2001-03-09
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3 posted 2001-11-24 10:37 PM


What insidious things cigarettes are!
I hope you find the strength to put them away for good.

Betty Lou Hebert

[This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 11-24-2001).]

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