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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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0 posted 2001-11-14 11:25 AM


Yellow, red...
You are all about sweetness.
Your thin skin is like a mask
Covering your inside soften heart.
Though your heart is fragile,
You never run out of juices.
A little bit sour add to taste of life.
Without it, it isn't complete.


//yellow, red...I'm comparing them to skin color
//sour in life, no dark without light. and no man without defects.
//soften heart as to compare the meat of tomato

Love,
Lizzy Vivian
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~I'm a person of two faces, Who is neither extraordinary nor plain. I'm not the most outspoken

© Copyright 2001 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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1 posted 2001-11-14 07:56 PM


WOW!  I never thought of myself as a tomato but my freind thought of himself as one one time... I wrote a song about it but I haven't posted it yet.  I suppose this will be a good time to post it.  Hey, great analogy.  God does reveal our natures in some pretty mysterious (strange) ways.  Good job on this one.  -Bob
Songbird
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2 posted 2001-11-14 08:08 PM


Good analogy..never thought about a tomato this way. Like the poem alot.
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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2001-11-15 05:51 PM


God susrely speaks through all things, even I see a tomato.  Joyce
aries_luv_ppl
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4 posted 2001-11-15 06:11 PM


thanks for all your replies. and Amen! Blessed are those who find extraordinary in ordinary things!

Lizzy Vivian
http://members.shaw.ca/home0/
~A little sour add to taste of life.
~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the thi

sandgrain
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5 posted 2001-11-16 12:05 PM


I'll never look at a tomato the same way again.  Love it!  
Thanks,
  Rae

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Member Patricius
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6 posted 2001-11-17 03:00 PM


Lizzy Vivian:  This is such a clever comparison!  God has given you a wonderful gift of words to weave into your unique poetry!

Betty Lou Hebert

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