Collison Upon High (repost from teen #4)

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Angel in Flight
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

0 posted 2001-06-23 10:38 PM

The clouds entwine heavens gate, the golden wings of angels dust as it hits the fairy plane.
The feathers rise, the wind begins, the tears, the cries, the storm of sin.
The lightening bolt, the thunder roar. The angels fly as the rain begins to pour.
They lift their heads above the sky.
Rampaging around as they cry!
The tempest thrashes amist the gate.
Hold back Satan!!!!............ Hold back hate!!!!
The angels thrust there mighty steed forward march until they bleed.!!
The mist arise, the clouds of sin, Satan hold back you can not win.
The twister emerges above the sky.
Angels now!!!! Fight!! FLY!!!
The volcano erupts the intensity within.
Angels now defeat the sin.
Hold back Satan hold back hate.
We can not allow them through thy gate.
Army arise the sound of fear.
Satan beware for God is near.
The swords clash, the thunder roars, the spears are thrown, the lightening sores.
The clouds blacken, the sea of doom, who will live to see the sun loom?
The devil is thrown upon the sea.
The tide explodes and engulfs his body.
The clouds of light shine again, and the angels sing praise for their win.
The thickened clouds depart the sky.
The rain evolves and a rainbow emerges upon high.
The angels wings spread once more and the fairy dust hits the floor.
The golden gate of love on high, shall rake forever, and maintain peace amongst the sky.
The clouds entwine heavens gate, as the golden wings of Angels dust shall forever hit God's Golden plain.

Things will get better just be happy with what has come your way today, and keep living for what may come the next.~ By Amanda inspired by Brian

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

1 posted 2001-06-23 10:57 PM

This is a beautiful reenactment of the Battle of right & Wrong- and the explusion  & defeat of Satan. What a fantastic display as you visualize it for us in your words!
         Thank You,
           David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-06-24 12:31 PM

Angel in Flight,

This was a wonderful adaptation of the infinite battle that rages on. You had me from the start, just had to keep reading. Great flowing lines with powerful images. Thank you for sharing this.

LW

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2001-06-24 01:35 AM

Angel-

What a blessing you have been given to look into the supernatural with your spiritual eyes and to see the battle that rages on for one's soul.... I like how you related it all with the powers of nature.... kind of like the book or Revelations, you used description
which can be easily understood here on earth.... and in the end a rainbow... a beautiful sign to mankind of God's victory. Exuberant energy expressed in your poem. Bob <><

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

4 posted 2001-06-24 08:47 AM

Dear one; I love your poetic name! This incredible poem is awesome indeed! How comforting that Our powerful and loving God is using His angels to keep us safe and at peace in His Loving Arms! I was mesmerized from the beginning and your images are fantastic! You surely have a grand gift for story telling and poetry! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

scout
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since 2001-06-16

Posts 175
no place owns me

5 posted 2001-06-24 12:12 PM

I love this poem and it reminds me of something we are conversing about in my Life & Teachings of Jesus Christ class. About how the Sadducces don't believe in spirits, and how the idea of spirits didn't surface until persian influences, during some time frame, i'm not sure. sorry for that little side note, Anyways, I have always believed in angels, even before I was taught what they were... I have been confused on why the angels fell and wanted to leave heaven... I wrote a song about it, i should post it sometime... Keep up the good work, and I hope to read more!

xscoutx
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears." - Ez. 24:1

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2001-06-24 06:34 PM

What a battle you took us through. Good poetry. Joyce

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