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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Notice when you join a group And the group is still clickish? Notice when you cry or stumble no one is there to help? Notice when you desperately crave replies no one answers? Notice when the candle is flickering there is no way to put it out? Notice when someone commits suicide everyone says I was too busy to care? Notice the look on their faces at the funeral when someone tells them she considered you her best friend? Notice that people usually care a lot more when its too late Ever notice life is fleeting And reckless driving can take it? [This message has been edited by Cuddlez (edited 11-27-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, all too sad but true. Well done piece of writing, Cuddlez. You hit the nail on the head. ------------------ Denise |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Thanks for your reply. Its something I noticed again on the boards tonight, the accepted members have millions of replies and the newer ones have one or two. Again, thanks :-) ------------------ Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. [This message has been edited by Cuddlez (edited 11-27-1999).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
It just takes a little time for everyone to get to know you! And you'll notice that people will become familiar with you faster the more you reply to other's posts! They'll take note of your name and seek out your postings! Everyone here is really nice. You're going to love it here! ------------------ Denise |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Cuddlez, I'd like to extend a personal welcome to the Passions Forums. We're all happy to have you here. A new perspective is always welcome here. Just get your name out there - Post... Comment... Visibility is the key... You'll be noticed for sure...  |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Thanks Nan. And a ray of sunshine and a smile to you too.:-) |
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femtastic Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 17Walla Walla, WA, USA |
Why are you changing subjects so rapidly? Its kind of weird and I DONT understand it |
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femtastic Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 17Walla Walla, WA, USA |
Why are you changing subjects so rapidly? Its kind of weird and I DONT understand it |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Sorry, Cuddlez. Will try to do better.!  You have posted a very emotional and thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing with us. ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A very sad poem Cuddlez, but so very true. Welcome to Passions, looking forward to reading more of your works. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Cuddlez...This is a very sad piece, and thanks for sharing. Welcome to passions. ------------------ If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Too bad we all tend to not realize things until it's too late. Just like they said, it takes a while around here, but if you reply to others and post, you will be noticed. Trust me, I felt the same way when I first got here. But it has become my home, and there are lots of wonderful people here. I know you'll love it as we come to know you better and you us. ------------------ <*\\\>< |
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femtastic Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 17Walla Walla, WA, USA |
are we supposed to feel sorry for cuddlez? im sorry, but theres worse things in the world to worry about |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
You gave the reader lots to think about with this piece....enjoyed the read Cuddlez and Welcome to Passions... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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femtastic Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 17Walla Walla, WA, USA |
ha |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Interesting poem... and welcome! As for the number of replies to members who've been here a while, remember their reputation wasn't established overnight. Every one was a newbie at some point... Hang in there and respond to others... you'll build your own audience and find your own favorites! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Cuddlez There's so much truth in so many of the lines you write, I wasn't sure til the end where it was heading and then - a tragic truth Very well done Elizabeth |
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femtastic Junior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 17Walla Walla, WA, USA |
this is such a laugh you consider this poetry? |
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