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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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I wrote this in French. . . I don't really know why. . . I have included my original in French and an English translation. . . you should also know that I speak very little French, but it just seemed right for this poem. . . Sven Parfois, il est difficile de dormir, particulieremnet quand vous n'etes pas la. Je pourrais avoir un reve de vous mais la douleur peut etre beaucoup plus que je puis soutenir. Anisi, je retourne et regarde votre cote du lit. Je vois votre impression dans le matelas que je puis commencer pour faire dheors votre societe et je commerce a sentir votre caresse douce. Et puis, vous etes la ave moi votre sourire chauffant mon coeur tellement maintenant je reve avec vous et je sais que nous ne separerons jamis. DREAMING WITH YOU Sometimes, it's hard to sleep Especially when you're not there I could have a dream of you But the pain can be more than I can bear. So, I turn over and look at your side of the bed. I see your imprint in the mattress I can begin to make out your form And I begin to feel your soft caress. And then, you're there with me, Your smile warms my heart So now, I'm dreaming with you And I know that we'll never part. ------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Le reve, c'est triste La solite La cresse, plus douce Au revene Sorry, rusty French And no dictionary Hope you get the point Anyway, this is beautiful! Elizabeth |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes I did Elizabeth. . . merci, mon ami. . . Sven. . ------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Tres Bien, Sven!! J'aime votre poeme!! Je parle francais un peu aussi mon ami!! Au revoir pour maintenant!! Brigitte ou Bridgette  ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Sven. Both versions, I'm sure, but I only understand the english! ------------------ Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you my friends. . .language has always fascinated me. . .I may post in other languages. . . we'll see. . Sven ------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Like it in both languages. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your talents will enhance us all. Thank you, Sven. |
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