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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Whispers Whispers in the darkness shedding light as my tired body snuggles into bed. Decisions lurking through my mind failing to reach a destination. People screaming as my indecisiveness plays with their organization. Up, down all around when will my senses hear the whispers so the light can penetrate the darkness? |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
(((((HUGS))))) my friend, sounds like you need them |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Dreamer, you have woven few words into an excellent description of a difficult emotion. Very well done. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh Lawrd have mercy ! The 3rd, 4th, 5th, and 6th lines you wrote, are the story of my life right now!! WOW, can I relate! Don't you hate that? I struggle with it daily right now, trying to make decisions, and everyone seems to be so "anxious" for me to get my life in order! It's not something you can do and decide overnight! It takes a long time to screw your life up - you certainly can't blink your eyes, and get it straight in an instant! hehe  I am so glad I read this...it really made sense to me! ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dreamer - You got my attention with a 'whisper' ... well done. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done, LD. You have certainly portrayed indecisiveness very well! You seem to have a talent to say much with few words! ------------------ Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey, G - Trust your instincts - It usually works...  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How true this is for me at this time. I'm terrible at making decisions usually - more so now - thanks for putting it so beautifully! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ruth: Thanks a bunch, your so kind. Balladeer:Thank you so very much. PoetFemmeFatale:Glad you enjoyed it, this is always me I never know what I'm doing till the last minute so it messes with everyone's lives associated with me. I'm lucky they are all so patient to still wait for my decision when it finally comes. Marge: Thank you kindly for your reply dsnyder: My thanks to you for your kind words. Nan: That's usally what it comes down to when I get done hem and hawing it to death. Poet deVine:Thank you for enjoying and relating to this poem. |
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