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evolution
Junior Member
since 1999-06-24
Posts 22
ma, usa

0 posted 1999-11-25 02:35 AM




in that instant i found love
the wayward meeting of our hands
the coldness of your skin melting into the warmth of mine
all my desires culminating in the scent of your hair
i saw my reason in your eyes
oh how i never wanted anymore than this
anymore than you
your skin tasted like love
as it gently brushed across my skin
i found tranquility in your kiss
as i fell into you, i fell into greatness
for that moment i was more than i could ever be
in that instant i found love
in that instant i found you

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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
1 posted 1999-11-25 09:50 AM


wow.....good job....very good.

Robert

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-11-25 03:39 PM


welcome to passions
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