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Open Poetry #4

i want

evolution
Junior Member

since 1999-06-24

Posts 22
ma, usa

0 posted 1999-11-25 02:19 AM

i want to swim in your water
but i would drown
so i wont get wet

i want to walk down your road
but ill get lost
so i stand at the fork

i want to climb your mountain
but i will
so i sit at the base

i want to soak in your sun
but ill burn
so i hide in the shade

i want to forget you
but i cant

evolution
Junior Member

since 1999-06-24

Posts 22
ma, usa

1 posted 1999-11-25 02:21 AM

theres suppose to be a fall in the mountain passage, sorry

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

2 posted 1999-11-25 09:52 AM

another good one!!! Hey you can edit your own poems. Just click on the icon at the top of your message and you can go back and add or delete. That is one of the things that make this forum so neat.

Robert

welcome..and please post more

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-11-25 03:40 PM

I like this..sometimes we have to go out on a limb, take the chances

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