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Open Poetry #4

Teardrops " please send comments

Lynn Burdette
Junior Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 25
Greensboro, Georgia ( I'm a Georgia peach!)

0 posted 1999-11-23 11:06 PM

Teardrops,teardrops in my eye,softly flowing as we say good-bye.
You reach and touch the tear as it falls and
kiss my lips as I stand tall.
Trying not to show my pain, I whisper softly your sweet name.
Teardrops, teardrops in my eye,softly flowing
as we say good-bye.
My face is wet and my heart is blue,
the pain inside, if you only knew.
I smile a fake smile as I look at your face
I know my memmories cannot be replaced.
Teardrops, teardrops in my eye, softly flowing as we say good-bye.
Please hurry and go, for I cannot contain the teardrops that fall, they fall like rain.
As I watch you leave, I wave to you
and hope these teardrops turn to dew.
Teardrops, teardrops in my eye, softly flowing as we say good-bye.

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Lynn Burdette

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-11-23 11:09 PM

I like this Lynn, it is sad and sweet at the same time! Welcome to Passions!

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Denise

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

2 posted 1999-11-24 01:07 AM

I felt the emotion.

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Lynn
Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

3 posted 1999-11-24 01:21 AM

Very emotional Lynn. And it's a great poem. All the luck to you. (((HUGS)))

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

Lynn Burdette
Junior Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 25
Greensboro, Georgia ( I'm a Georgia peach!)

4 posted 1999-11-24 01:32 AM

Thanks for all your replies and Lynn (((HUGS))) to you also.

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Lynn Burdette

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-11-24 08:26 AM

Welcome to passions, make yourself at home

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

6 posted 1999-11-24 09:24 AM

This is really sweet and full of emotion. It's a bummer saying goodbye, particularly when it isn't mutual.

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