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The Ache In My Heart
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The Ache In My Heart |
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Lynn Burdette Junior Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 25Greensboro, Georgia ( I'm a Georgia peach!) |
The day is done, the ache in my heart has begun. I long for the one with the gentle touch, The way he holds me, Oh I love so much His hard body and warm breath on my skin I wait on the day he will hold me again. His loving smile and soft,soft kiss,are just few of the things I do miss. The beautiful words that come from his heart, words that I will never depart. I close my eyes and I can smell the sweetness of his skin. The aroma that makes my heart beat faster within. You see he is part of my soul and someday I will be, there with that part finally free. If you pass him give him a smile. Tell him that I love him, that our heartache is only for a while. [This message has been edited by Lynn Burdette (edited 11-23-1999).] |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
beautiful... ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
This is beautiful, and heartbreakingly bittersweet. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Lynn Burdette Junior Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 25Greensboro, Georgia ( I'm a Georgia peach!) |
Thanks for your replies. I am new to this and wondered if i stinked at writing or not. E-mail me dboivin@bellsouth.net [This message has been edited by Lynn Burdette (edited 11-23-1999).] |
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