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Open Poetry #4

Good at Goodbyes

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

0 posted 1999-11-23 10:24 AM

Gave her all the best I had
She took it all away
Built a dream on water
Watched it wash away
Had a life
Held it in my hand
When she left it caught the wind
To a far off foriegn land
Haunted by a single thought
Lonley in my head
Never met no on like you
Isn't that what she said
Alone, better off that way
My seams always fall apart
Before they start to fray
Walked her to the plane
I felt the pain
I knew I'd never see this girl again
Could of sworn I heard a whisper
As she ascended to the sky
She's really gotten good
Really gotten good at goobyes

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-11-23 10:40 AM

Wow....wonderfully written

Dolphins3
Member

since 1999-09-30

Posts 135
Wisconsin

2 posted 1999-11-23 11:08 AM

Lostboy I really liked this poem. It's sad when we have to say Goodbye. *hugs*

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

3 posted 1999-11-23 11:20 AM

Thanks for the words....and hugs.

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