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Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12
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Honea Path, SC USA

0 posted 1999-11-21 11:52 PM


Together on Life’s road

Help me when I stumble,
Catch me when I fall.
Teach me to be humble
Break right through my wall.

Make me face my many fears,
Tell me I’m not alone.
Kiss away my tears,
Make your heart my home.

Be my beacon in the dark
My strength when I am weak.
With you beside me all the way
I’ll climb the highest peak.

Be my comfort in the storm
My partner in life’s ride.
And take me to the ends of time
Together, side by side.


© Copyright 1999 Tara Simms - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-11-22 12:25 PM


Very very nice, you two!

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Denise


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-11-22 11:02 AM


Thank you denise....there she goes giving me credit again. She's the one that did the hard part, coming up with the idea to begin with

[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 11-23-1999).]

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 1999-11-22 11:06 AM


Hmmm..I might have to get you to do one with me my friend.. . This was wonderful you two!
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 1999-11-22 11:06 AM


Tara,
Good job well done.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 1999-11-22 02:16 PM


Tara this was fantastic, I just loved it!
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
6 posted 1999-11-23 07:28 AM


I like this one a lot, Tara - Teamwork - gets you much farther in life, for sure...
Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA
7 posted 1999-11-23 09:55 AM


Thanks for the comments everyone.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
8 posted 1999-11-23 11:04 AM


Thank you everyone for your remarks

Marilyn, I'd love that

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