Open Poetry #4 |
Together on Life's road (with Hoot) |
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Together on Life’s road Help me when I stumble, Catch me when I fall. Teach me to be humble Break right through my wall. Make me face my many fears, Tell me I’m not alone. Kiss away my tears, Make your heart my home. Be my beacon in the dark My strength when I am weak. With you beside me all the way I’ll climb the highest peak. Be my comfort in the storm My partner in life’s ride. And take me to the ends of time Together, side by side. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very very nice, you two! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you denise....there she goes giving me credit again. She's the one that did the hard part, coming up with the idea to begin with [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 11-23-1999).] |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Hmmm..I might have to get you to do one with me my friend.. . This was wonderful you two! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tara, Good job well done. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tara this was fantastic, I just loved it! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like this one a lot, Tara - Teamwork - gets you much farther in life, for sure... |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Thanks for the comments everyone. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you everyone for your remarks Marilyn, I'd love that |
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