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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Magnetic Moon ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 Have you ever seen the moon so low that it touched the earth's horizon? Have you ever seen it rise so high that even the stars are hiding? I have seen it crescent. I have seen it full. I have seen it haloed, with such magnetic pull. The force that rules the ocean and the hearts of woman and man. The magnetic pull of emotions when shining full across the land. What a source of energy, encased within it's orb. Energy cascading causing hearts to soar. Magnetic moon of love shining so very bright, causing hearts to surrender on this full-moon night. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Willem Member
since 1999-11-18
Posts 139Inverness, FL, USA |
Beautiful, Marge. I like the imagery, the symbolism, the mood, the form. The rhyming did not sound contrived, as the right words just seemed to fall naturally into the right places. Willem |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Willem - Thank you so much. The words were simply pulled from me by the magnetism of the moon. So glad you enjoyed. Welcome to Passions.  ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
wonderful imagery |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks, Hoot ! The true imagery hangs in the sky tonight. So lovely that she shines her light upon us all. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another magnetic piece here, Marge!! ------------------ Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
See, Denise ... you were just 'drawn' to it ! Thanks gal. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
'Almost' six years later ... Luna rises in beauty the beauty that continually pulls me back to write of her~  -ing this one for a real cutie~(Thank YOU for being here to read this little library of rhyme)  ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love your moon poems ARCTIC WIND |
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