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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-11-22 09:49 PM


Magic Rose

Gleaming out a chameleon bower,
Showering colors, of separate shower,
A blue rose, red rose, white rose light,
Eloquence, of a rose in sight.

While forming dew, on petals' new,
Run down to where the nettle grew.

Colors devouring, in passions bright,
Sensual variations, of its flight,
Tribute dower, of rose power,
This fantasy, for the hour.

And I touched it oh so tender,
In the gentlest, of surrender.

Whatever its goal, I lost control,
My surrender, of both heart and soul,
Showing its white and reds and blues,
These moods, of magic color hues.

The mystery, of the roses might,
The sensuous shocking lime rose light.

I placed it, in my ivory tower,
A rose encaged, with all its power,
To visit it, each lonely night,
This blue rose, red rose, white rose light.

I revel, in its magic glade
And pray this rose, should never fade.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 1999-11-22 09:53 PM


I hope your rose never fades also Sy. The rose of your poetry. Marvellous again!
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 1999-11-22 11:29 PM


Severn,
I hope so too,Thank you so much.

Ohme
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3 posted 1999-11-22 11:36 PM


Beautiful, Seymour. And I pray your rose never fades!

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?

RainbowGirl
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4 posted 1999-11-23 12:53 PM


Seymour: You're such a romantic and I'm pleased you are, I think you'd see roses in buttercups..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 1999-11-23 06:35 AM


The magic rose made light the hand
To write new words at mind's demand
Perhaps you see within the day
The magic rose's hunter's prey

Nan
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6 posted 1999-11-23 07:18 AM


A rose for you, my dear friend....

Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 1999-11-23 07:25 AM


How sweet the roses, rose of Nan
How sweet the poet's gentle hand
How sweet the cage, the prison strong
How sweet the captor's nightime song
Elizabeth

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 1999-11-23 09:04 AM


Ohme,
I pray so too, thank you.
RG,
Each rose a buttercup
Each buttercup a rose.
Thank you Rainbow.
Elizabeth,
Today I be the avatar
A rose for you my star.
Nan,
For the one you sent I send you two.

Sunshine
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9 posted 1999-11-23 09:08 AM


The sensuous scent of roses sent
take me dreaming, and there I went
to Sy's garden filled with delight...
methinks I'll there spend dreamfilled night.

Well done, Sir Sy.

hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 1999-11-23 09:48 AM


Beautiful
WhtDove
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11 posted 1999-11-23 10:41 AM


Seymour no words I could find would do this justice! Just exquisite! I have something that would go with this just perfectly, but I will need to find a way to get it here. It may be a while but I when I do, I will give it to you!
Pepper
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12 posted 1999-11-23 11:07 AM


Stunning Sy..(sigh)...

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


WhtDove
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13 posted 1999-11-23 11:56 AM


OK Seymour here ya go!



Sunshine
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14 posted 1999-11-23 12:02 PM


Whtdove, charming addition to Sy's wonderful poem.
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 1999-11-23 07:11 PM


Sunshine,
Getting ready for thanksgiving takes time
sorry it took so long to reply.
Your poem was delicious I'll have another portion *L*
Hoot,
Same as above and I would'nt mind another portion of beautiful.
WhtDove,
Bad time of the year for you if they run out of turkeys they might start looking at Doves.
HAHA.
Pepper,
Thank you deer Happy holiday.

Denise
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16 posted 1999-11-23 09:01 PM


A lovely bouquet! Very lovely, Seymour.

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Denise


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