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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Magic Rose Gleaming out a chameleon bower, Showering colors, of separate shower, A blue rose, red rose, white rose light, Eloquence, of a rose in sight. While forming dew, on petals' new, Run down to where the nettle grew. Colors devouring, in passions bright, Sensual variations, of its flight, Tribute dower, of rose power, This fantasy, for the hour. And I touched it oh so tender, In the gentlest, of surrender. Whatever its goal, I lost control, My surrender, of both heart and soul, Showing its white and reds and blues, These moods, of magic color hues. The mystery, of the roses might, The sensuous shocking lime rose light. I placed it, in my ivory tower, A rose encaged, with all its power, To visit it, each lonely night, This blue rose, red rose, white rose light. I revel, in its magic glade And pray this rose, should never fade. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I hope your rose never fades also Sy. The rose of your poetry. Marvellous again! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, I hope so too,Thank you so much. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Beautiful, Seymour. And I pray your rose never fades! ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Seymour: You're such a romantic and I'm pleased you are, I think you'd see roses in buttercups..  HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The magic rose made light the hand To write new words at mind's demand Perhaps you see within the day The magic rose's hunter's prey |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A rose for you, my dear friend....  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How sweet the roses, rose of Nan How sweet the poet's gentle hand How sweet the cage, the prison strong How sweet the captor's nightime song Elizabeth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ohme, I pray so too, thank you. RG, Each rose a buttercup Each buttercup a rose. Thank you Rainbow. Elizabeth, Today I be the avatar A rose for you my star. Nan, For the one you sent I send you two. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The sensuous scent of roses sent take me dreaming, and there I went to Sy's garden filled with delight... methinks I'll there spend dreamfilled night. Well done, Sir Sy. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Seymour no words I could find would do this justice! Just exquisite! I have something that would go with this just perfectly, but I will need to find a way to get it here. It may be a while but I when I do, I will give it to you! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Stunning Sy..(sigh)... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
OK Seymour here ya go!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whtdove, charming addition to Sy's wonderful poem. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Getting ready for thanksgiving takes time sorry it took so long to reply. Your poem was delicious I'll have another portion *L* Hoot, Same as above and I would'nt mind another portion of beautiful. WhtDove, Bad time of the year for you if they run out of turkeys they might start looking at Doves. HAHA. Pepper, Thank you deer Happy holiday. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A lovely bouquet! Very lovely, Seymour. ------------------ Denise |
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