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To Elizabeth
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To Elizabeth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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To Elizabeth You have touched my heart through your mind. You are truly that one of a kind. Like the poem, I wonder who you are? Your rhyming words out shine most star. Since I cannot stop the press of time I confess I'm four times past my prime. And I must be bold and say my say, That I am no Amen-Ra of today. The words you string from head to toe, Are all of you I really know. Like a bird I rest your feathered nest Of the storms my life have compressed. But the sounds I hear of distant storm Have plagued my heart of sheltered warm. And your need for rest has brought much fear, This charmed one, that is not so near. I pray you rest the rest that's due. And come back to me in bright and new. Your fantasia has flavored a fantasy. And I pray my poems did the same for thee. My soul gives you an open door. Please enter it and say no more. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your lovely tribute will be her balm. Well done, dear Sir. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
What touching words you give! I'm sure she'll treasure it! |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
A beautiful tribute and timely offering... ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Most beautiful and very touching... A wonderful tribute Sy.. ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To one and all of you above I give you all undieing love. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Four times his prime, the poet cries Suppose his prime were thirty-five Defying nature, sense, and time While I, my friend, am in my prime |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Your little poem I wont digress, For to do so would be a mess. *L* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Truly your star doth shine brightly my friend. . .beautiful words. . . Sven ------------------ comme toujours |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful and touching. ------------------ Denise |
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