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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-22 01:27 AM


Titanic Lovers
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

Sailing to
eternity
lost
and tossed
upon
the sea

Sightless lovers
dance no more
entombed
instead
on
oceans
floor

'neath
the
cover of
the sea
Titanic lovers
melody

plays
oh,
so
hauntingly

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 1999-11-22 10:52 AM


Wow.....interesting subject matter....just so happens to be listed on my top all time favorite movie list. Nicely done
Toerag
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Ala bam a
2 posted 1999-11-22 10:55 AM


Cinco de'Mayo?...LOL.....nicely done my little Margie!!!
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 1999-11-22 02:24 PM


Hoot - Didn't see the movie ... I already knew the ending ! LOL !
Toe- (May 5) ... yep ! Thanks for the 'nicely done' ... and 'My Little Margie' sure brings up some pleasant memories.


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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Toerag
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Ala bam a
4 posted 1999-11-22 02:29 PM


Have ya been to Community Poetry lately?...I see you're a trapeze artist now?....And then some?...LOL
Denise
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5 posted 1999-11-22 08:00 PM


Very well done, Marge. I love it!

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Denise


Severn
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6 posted 1999-11-22 09:02 PM


I must confess - I saw the movie 7 times and now I own the video and I swear it's my only case of movie obssession. This poem is great Marge - it flows like those icy waves.
RainbowGirl
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7 posted 1999-11-23 01:04 AM


Our hearts will go on....well, they'll keep beating, that's for sure..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

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