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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Why do you weep in solitude? What sorrow does your tears contain, As you withdraw in quietude, To hide within your wall of pain? Wing mockingbird unto the skies, Adrift upon life's soothing breeze, Leave behind, pain's woeful cries, And glory in life's harmonies. Soft as spring's winds, you comfort me, As I traverse, adversity, Allowing me within to see, Inner peace, tranquility. As you suffer, so suffer I, Upon your wings, we seek the sky. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 11-21-1999).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Mike, this is absolutely beautiful. When I saw the title and the author, I knew I wouldn't be disapointed and indeed I wasn't, not one little bit  Ruth |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Mike This is a wonderful poem. Wish I had had a friend like you on darkest days. Elizabeth |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is beautiful Mike and shows so much heart.... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Extraordinarily beautiful! *sigh* ------------------ Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank you all very much for your kind comments. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very beautiful, Mike. Another treasure! ------------------ Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank you so kindly Denise... btw.. if you see this.. did you get the e-mail? |
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Lyndz Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 31 |
Mike, absolutely beautiful. It took my breath away. I'm almost speechless... ------------------ "Peace and Love, tears of joy, kindness of strangers. All of your roads paved in gold by Guardian Angels." ~~Blessid Union of Sould~~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Mike, yes I did and I just sent want back at ya! Thanks so much! ------------------ Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I have to echo all of the beautifuls above - for it really is! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Mike, even Shakespeare would have to approve of your tetrametric (is that a word?) adaptation of his format. This is lovely... |
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