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tulip
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since 1999-07-04
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0 posted 1999-11-21 02:30 AM


My reality
is here in my head.
I hold you close
and slip into bed.
You whisper to me
and touch my face,
I look in your eyes,
and we start to embrace.
We slowly make love,
all the night through,
until morning light comes,
the moment so true.
All I can do
is sit here and wait,
Until life gives to me,
our wishes, our fates.

© Copyright 1999 tulip - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-11-22 01:21 AM


I found this to be very romantic and hopeful! Very nice little poem here! I do believe it deserves to go back to the top! I think more would enjoy reading this! Thanks for sharing such a lovely thought/moment.....it made me sigh a happy sigh!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale


FreeByrd
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

2 posted 1999-11-22 09:37 PM


Spread your petals tulip and reach for the sun.Each new day holds something new for you if you just look for it.

she who waits is lost.

-RS

sraet
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 31

3 posted 1999-11-22 11:34 PM


I really like this one, thanks for sharing it.
hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-11-23 09:33 AM


Beautiful
tulip
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since 1999-07-04
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unknown
5 posted 1999-11-26 01:12 AM


Thank you, all...
mc
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 67
México
6 posted 1999-11-26 02:07 AM


ahh, really nice...
mc
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 67
México
7 posted 1999-11-26 02:07 AM


ahh, really nice...

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mcestrada

Dark Angel
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8 posted 1999-11-26 06:20 AM


Tulip, absolutley beautiful!!!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



tulip
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9 posted 1999-11-26 04:21 PM


I'm glad you all enjoyed this!
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