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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Reflecting in my fallen tears A face is floating, so forlorn A product of my very fears I’m wishing I was never born Ugliness, apathy adorns And I’m the numbest one of all Bespeckled with jewels of scorn To blessed fetuses I crawl In banging my head on this wall They laugh, so easy to amuse My wrists a crimson waterfall Misguided hopes are what I choose Fun and easy to abuse Oblivion is drawing near I am bidding my last adieus Unworthy of your mournful tears. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This is so sad  |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You are worthy of anyones tears Amy. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Hey SysD, this one is very well written! I was just wondering, why are most of your poems about sadness and depression(or so it seems). Have you tried writing about love or happiness or something like that, it can be quite challenging! |
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jenmarie Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 27 |
so sad but i can understad the feeling - i hope you dont feel this way too often |
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