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Let Love Flow
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Let Love Flow |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Let Love Flow ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 Like the mighty oceans roar, the breaking of the waves ... My love for you flows each and every day. Like the rivers flowing current, rapid in it's run ... My love for you flows, and will never be done. Like the whitecaps building out on the lake ... My love for you is windswept with the chances I take. Like the water cresting over the falls, My love for you cascades ... you are my all. Like the stream down the mountain knowing no retreat ... My love for you flows and sweeps me off my feet. Like the babbling of the water in the smallest brook ... My love for you pools in the smallest nook. Like the shedding of a tear that falls upon my cheek ... My love for you flows until it's reached it's peak. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Erynn Griffin Junior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 27San Angelo, TX United States |
I really enjoyed this poem I once was in love but all that has vanished I hope taht one day love will find me again |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Erynn - Love will come again. Jump in the stream ... get your feet wet. Wade in the ocean of emotion. Stand under the waterfall. Share a tear with a friend. Love resides in all these places. You will be covered in love again. Thank you for reading what I write. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very lovely Marge..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely written Marge  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pepper and Hoot - Thank you both for enjoying the read. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dusk Treader
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Beautiful piece! Hehe, I'm really enjoying all of your pieces, wonderful all! ------------------ "'Cause there's a hunger, a longing to escape, from the life I live when I'm awake" - Creed - "Higher" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Marge! I love how everything related to the water! My favorite! ------------------ Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, Denise. Just emerged from the soaking hot tub. I also like water ... so cleansing and inspirational. So glad it's a favorite of yours. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Marge, this is so perfect. ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhMe - Thank you. The movement of the water just swept me with it. So glad to know you found it 'perfect'. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Beautiful, Injun gal. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Slinger - Thank you kindly, sir. *she blushes* ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I like the words of this poem.keep it up.  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I like the words of this poem.keep it up. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I like the words of this poem.keep it up. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, VanDana~ I will ! I will ! I will ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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