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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 1999-12-10 11:11 AM



Don't you see how far we are?
And I don't have your arms around me,
There's no harm in love,
So come to me,
I'm remembering you a lot,
Even though we're miles apart,
You'll be in my heart,
Don't you realise how long It's been?
I haven't seen you that long,
I'm longing for you,
Don't you ever remember me,
Whenever you're,
Can't you see me through your heart,
I remember you,
Even though we're miles apart,
Do you ever remember those times when we're together?
I wonder If you do ,
But I do remember you,
Even though we're miles apart

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Dolphins3
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since 1999-09-30
Posts 135
Wisconsin
1 posted 1999-12-10 05:30 PM


Vandana, I can realate to this one.  
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2000-01-17 03:26 PM


I know what it's like to be many many miles away from someone special....it is sooo hard!!  Nice Poem!!

Take Care
Bridgette

Gentleman Charles
New Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 4

3 posted 2000-01-30 06:17 PM


Strong, yet very elegant. Love is the strongest tie of the loveing heart.  Touching, ever, so slightly, the touch is love, beauty in its purest form.  Superb!!  

 

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