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Tender Touch |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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tender touch standing on the morning sand he looked into the depth of me and felt the strength of undertow pulling ever close to me a tender touch upon my face a fleeting moment come and gone just the way he touched me with his hand a happiness I'd never known a tender stroke of love divine will last me for the rest of time Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 12-09-1999).] |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Elizabeth this took me back in time. I once experienced a touch like this. To experience it once more would be bliss, but your words help bring back to my life the things I miss. Thanks so much. I love it.  B Gravitt |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
What a moment you have captured my friend. What a moment - beautiful. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah! Sweet and tender! Great imagery here too!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend - BEAUTIFULLY REMEMBERED The look, the touch they mean so much. Written on the hearts pages to last through all the ages. Mine to keep mine to remember, giving my all to sweet surrender. < !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 12-09-1999).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, A beautiful bouquet, did you say thank you? *L* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderfully painted my friend. . . Your palette is indeed multi-colored. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Athas Junior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 24Edinburgh, Scotland |
What can I say that hasn't been said. Just thought I'd like to let you know that I like the poem. It captures a moment so perfectly. A moment which I imagine we all long for. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
To the ladies, I knew you would feel the undertow To the men, Yes, I will say thank you when I get the bouquet, but this touch was only in my imagination Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Elizabeth! So beautiful! Denise |
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broker6 Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 132Bellevue, NE, Sarpy |
E: This is very, very good. It has the quality of truth about it, and truth has a ring to it that is difficult to hide or disguise. Write more like this . . . simple thoughts, vivid word pictures. Bully for you. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Denise and Broker Thank you for your very kind remarks, Glad you liked this poem Liz |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem. |
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