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The Shooting Star
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The Shooting Star |
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Lyndz Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 31 |
A fiery tear Tail blazing behind Streaking across Black forever A diamond of gold Black white and red A most beautiful sight You'll see ever As it travels Its unplanned course Through nothingness And far beyond It carroes hopes And many wishes For only an instant And then it's gone It appears suddenly Out of nowhere Like some myth Or a fantasy Displaying to all Its marvelous And never-ending Majesty If you're quick You can catch it If you're not Then you're stuck For some people Consider this A big source Of good luck |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ah....Lyndz ... it is a star thang ! The poets have captured the light of the stars on this starry night. Should be a challenge to all ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lyndz Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 31 |
Marge~ I wrote that after spending an hour outside (11-midnite) with my father, watching for shooting stars. I appreciate your post. : ) This is my first time here. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Let me take this opportunity to welcome you. I will enjoy reading new posts from you. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lyndz Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 31 |
Thank you very much. I think I'm going to enjoy conversing with other poets who write for fun.  Besides, it's always nice to get some feedback.~Lyndz |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Beautiful! I went out to look for stars, but evidently I missed the show. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Lyndz. Keep writing, you are quite talented! ------------------ Denise |
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