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The Stars In My Eyes No Longer Shine
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The Stars In My Eyes No Longer Shine |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The Stars In My Eyes No Longer Shine ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 Somewhere in the night a star with all it's light... twinkles and shines and brings thoughts of you. When you were here and I held you near, you placed the light of the stars in my eyes for all others to see. Now that you're gone and I'm here alone, there is no light to be seen in my eyes filled with tears. When will you return so the light will again burn in these eyes now flooded with tears? Return as quickly as you can I long to see the light. ````````````````````````````````````````````` I swear, it's just a *STAR THANG* ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Well it twinkles here  ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhMe ... thanks for the *twinkle*. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This surely shines! Well done, Marge! ------------------ Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When I'm about, the stars do hide so come evening, I do abide somewhere else, for all to see so Marge, may star shine return to thee. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Yes, this certainly shines as does it's creator |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise - Thanks for the 'shine' Sunshine - Like the 'sunshine' versus 'stars' Ruth - Thank you, my dear for such a nice compliment. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Your star will always shine. well done. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I do agree with all above....you do shine brightly Marge! Liked your poem much..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
This is beautiful! I've missed that twinkle in my own eyes before.. I hope it's back in yours! Wonderful read, loved it ------------------ "'Cause there's a hunger, a longing to escape, from the life I live when I'm awake" - Creed - "Higher" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour - What a nice thing to say. Pepper - You're such a sweetie. Dusk Treader - Thank you. That was written on a 'Star Thang' night. My eyes are shining with love for all. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I like this poem very much.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, VanDana~ Anything to do with the celestial bodies just 'talks' to me. Thanks for popping back in here and reading the earlier posts. I love to do that too. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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