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When you look at me
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When you look at me |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I was surprised to see you, I held my head high, Dark clouds coming, You didn't say a word , But you looked at me, I see love in your eyes, When you talk to me, I'm in love with you, When you looked deep into my eyes, For a moment in time, It seems everlastings, Our love will never die, When you gave so much love, I'm still aware of those days of misery, Since you 've come to my life , When your days and night, Gets a little bit colder, You'll touch me, And look into my eyes, A thought ,It was all untrue, Untill there all at once I knew you would love me, You stood still, Feeling your heartbeat with mine, We drifted apart, Here we are by my side Beleieve what you say, I was surprised to see you, When yo talk to me, You came to me Day turned into night, You talked to me, Gave your heart to me |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful work, Vandana. Now how's about you joining the rest of us in Open #5? Elizabeth "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice vandana...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice, enjoyed the experience |
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