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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 1999-11-26 03:40 AM


Please take away the pain
Replace it with some joy.
This loss; Eternal bane.
"Surcease please!" I employ.

My heart...consistant ache,
Lurches each tiem you speak.
True love... no never fake,
Its absence makes me weak.

With one word: Hope. Next...none.
Back and forth, a mind play.
When shall despair be done?
If ever... not today.

For this day I still cry,
Tears doubting the future.
Yet always I shall try...
My love for you is pure.



© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-11-26 03:53 AM


Getting your poetic feet wet again are we? No need to, your verse is a little unused but rocks well indeed.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade
(Marquis de Sade)



poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
2 posted 1999-11-26 09:57 AM


Hang in there, dear Christopher - I am putting some turkey and cranberry sauce in an envelope right now to mail to you - you say you had a horrible T-day, well, it's because you didn't eat MY cooking.... So I'm sending some your way! Um...chin up trollboy....you will find peace.

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale


Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 1999-11-26 11:12 AM


VEry well written my friend. ummm..those comments you refrained from sending yesterday....will they be coming in the near future??..lol. I need to be prepared. :P
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-11-26 01:32 PM


Sorry you had such a bad T-Day yesterday Chris...hey you could have had dinner with me. With 35 people at my mothers, one more wouldn't have made a bit of difference. Glad to see you writing again
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 1999-11-26 05:42 PM


I had a bad TG too Chris, we don't even celebrate it over here Glad to see you back in OP

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The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
6 posted 1999-11-26 08:28 PM


A big sunshiny smile for you Christopher...

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
7 posted 1999-11-26 10:16 PM


Excellent verse Christopher! I know your going through a difficult time I'm sorry and I wish I could take away the pain. Hugs to ya! Glad to see you post again, it's been toooooooo long!
Oscar Wilde
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 31
San Francisco
8 posted 2000-04-01 12:27 PM


This shall be my anthem.....I hope....


Your biggest fan,

O.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
9 posted 2003-01-01 04:39 AM


yes, I know
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