Open Poetry #4 |
Written In The Stars |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Written In The Stars ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 As surely as the stars shine on lovers here below, there is a fact indisputable, this much I know. On the blazing tail of a shooting star, the sparks spun from it's trace, sending a light to guide me to your loving face. As we gaze at the glow of the starry night, surely it is meant ... that we meet in the star light of the moment we've been sent. The moment is here, the moment is now. It's been written in the stars that I find you, somehow. Look upward toward the Heavens, past the Milky Way ... you'll see me in the stars beckoning you, come and play! ````````````````````````````````````````````` For Balladeer ... ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I loved your poem - I love the stars Elizabeth |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, Marge, you sure know how to take an idea and run with it! Let's hope the FSU halfbacks can do the same tomorrow! |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Beautiful! Inspired by the meteor shower? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth - Starlit skies are amazing! Balladeer - FSU's stars will shine. Thanks for the inspiration. *Smile* ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Here's hoping!!!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tara - Thanks ... no, not the meteor shower, just the stars in a new friends eyes. Balladeer ... Here's wishing on a star ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Shooting stars - aren't they great as metaphors? Very nice work, Marge... [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 11-20-1999).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks, Nan. Shooting stars are great inspiration for lighting up a thought. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very romantic Marge.....written with such heart...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sooooooooo beautiful, Marge! ------------------ Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pepper and Denise - Thanks so much for letting me know that you appreciate what this little heart pens. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Star gazing is a favorite activity of mine. I don't know any constellations, but ohhh, they are so beautiful just to look at against the black sky! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you Joy14. Knowing their beauty is all that's required. Pick a star and make a wish ... it just might come true. You can name it anything you want and it will twinkle at you. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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