Open Poetry #4 |
A new star in the evening sky |
RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
A new star in the evening sky A star which sparkles should never die It burns because of love This shiny star was made by us This star will guide each move we make It will burn with every breath we take Hand in hand we'll find a way A love like this deserves to stay This star born from laughter will always shine Now that the flame in your soul burns in mine The candle lit by love that wonderful night Giving off light, burning so bright! Originally posted November 25th 1998 ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 11-23-1999).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
ahhhhh rainbow this is beautiful I love that line "Now that the flame in your soul burns in mine"...beautifully done big hugs |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, this is beautiful |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
A magnificent light this is! Very well done RG! ------------------ Denise |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
One of your best Rainbow ... thank you for reposting it ... HUSG |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Definitely worth another read (especially with this aging and senility stuff that's plaguing me!) *S* Well done! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very lovely Rainbow!!! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Iloveit: Big hugs back.. Hoot: Thank you.. HUGS Denise: Well I wouldn't lay claim to being as bright as the moon but it was close *g* HUGS JTF: You're welcome.. HUSG Suthern: Senility can't be yours, I grabbed it for myself but being generous, I shared with you *g* HUSG Pepper: Thanks sweetheart HUSG ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ms Rainbow,Truly a beautiful poem this is Well Done my Dear thanks for reposting. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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