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What is Christmass without a child?
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What is Christmass without a child? |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Hear oh, Mighty!! how soon will I face death? power comes to show that life has nothing else for me. many stages have I walked through not finding a place to lie my head my soul exhausted for a sweet embrace closed its lids for a better taste. sail away that's what they say where's the sea to sail upon? shadows beneath my head lullaby is sang away. I see no faith beyond my path What's is christmass without a child? Innocence has set me free and not a dream to stand by me. Sickness is all around 24 hours to put me off I wish I could ease my heart but what's is christmass without a child? ------------------ mcestrada |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Hola... bueno. sorry, I know little Spanish, but welcome to Passions... the poem was well written. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MCEstrada - Welcome to Passions. May your heart sing with blessings. Christmas is nothing without the Child. For Christmas is all about the Child who came that night many years ago. May you find blessings in your heart remembering the birth of that child. May we all remember and give thanks for the gift our Father gave us in His Child, Jesus. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, wouldn't be Christmas without Him! I enjoyed your poem mc! Welcome to Passions! ------------------ Denise |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Though my heart is sometimes troubled my faith will always reamin thanks to HIM, I guess what I meant in this poem is that my inner child, my innocence, is no longer with me, and I feel very sad because of that... I'll try to rescue it through the Christmas spirit, so I can see the light and maybe dream again... Thank you all for your comments.... ------------------ mcestrada |
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