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The voyage
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The voyage |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The voyage Steeped from dreams like leaves of tea And pushed by puffs of memory gusts. The mind sails ever o'er this sea, The past has built an omnibus. Through storms and fog and nights of doubt, This vessel sails on former flight. And never will it come about, Till hung on shoal or goal in sight. What cannot seem will come to be. For every try there is a latch, For every lock there is a key, For every key there is a match. A soul in love steers this course, Into an end that's yet to come. It goes beyond the albatross, To reach and meld two souls as one. Those that live and love the best Are souls that join and meet the test. |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
great use of imigery....really nice! ------------------ "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This one's a keeper, Sy. Very well done. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simply beautiful, Seymour!  ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Abagail, Thanks for the nice comp. Balladeer, OK I,ll keep it. Thanks Denice, You are a love, thank you for the read and comp. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Seymore, as you well know, I can very much relate to this piece. Thank you for posting ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
That's my guy, Sy - at it again... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
So fortunate a soul is she The object of your poetry Just beautiful! Elizabeth |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I agree....simply beautiful Sy! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ruth, Any relate of yours is a relate of mine. Nan, I have been yours from the day we met. Elizabeth, And so fortunate a soul is he That receives your poetry. Pepper, Beauty is as beauty does. Thank you Pepper. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, your poetry is becoming so much more romantic...is it age, wisdom, or just your soul talking? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, I would say a little of all three. *L* |
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Spyder New Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 9 |
your writing is absolutely intriguing, i'm looking forward to reading more of your work! ~~SpYdeR |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Spyder, Intriguing, what a wonderful word, thank you so much. |
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