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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Creation Disaster forms an order, From firmament and water, In this stew, grew myriad spawn And from this brew we were born. Change, the sculptor of the lot, Change, the magic of begot, Fosters life in many ways, As centuries move like days. We are, a wink, a flotsam dot, Living for, I know not what, Waiting for the end abort, For an answer of a sort. We ask ourselves in constant zeal, To whom and what do we appeal? Change is the only order, That drinks disaster's water. An eternity of one And eternity for none. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Deep. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very interesting and thought provoking Seymour. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The answer to your question is in a locust's trill. Elizabeth |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
And change is the only constant my friend - the only thing on which we can rely. Love this piece Sy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RSEvans, Not to deep I hope. Martie, Just a change of pace. Elizabeth, You have just revealed the secret of the ages. Severn, Yes it is true, change is the only constant. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 11-18-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Seymour, your creation is a beautiful creation! Well done, again! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow, this is a bit different for you, but well done  ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
I Liked this a lot. Great Poem! I enjoyed it very much. ------------------ If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you for the read and comment. Hoot, We all have our moments. *L* Lynn, Joy is in the eye of the beholder,I thank you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Thought provoking .....and excellent.... A great read Sy..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pepper, Thank you so much for the great read *L* |
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