Open Poetry #4 |
Freedom Rocks |
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
They’re not much to look at Plain gray stones the size of dimes But the symbol they represent Is a symbol for all times. Two little stones, pebbles really From the wall as it fell that day Berlin’s liberty won so fiercely Just ten years ago today Freedom vibrates from the rocks As I hold them in my hand Now, perhaps the world will know Freedom throughout the land In honor of the day, ten years ago today that the Berlin wall fell. I collect rocks and a friend gave me some pebbles from the Berlin wall..chipped off that night as freedom was won. I treasure them as I treasure my freedom. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
here's a big yahoo for freedom! ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Congrats on your freedom rocks....and freedom DOES rock! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes it does! Great poem PdV! Maybe you could have this printed and mounted with these little rocks as a keepsake! That would be awesome! ------------------ Denise |
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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
it is great to have a little piece of history and a great poem to go with it I like collecting rock from places i have been - little pieces of the past |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a wonderful expression of freedom PDV....nicely done |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your comments. I have rocks from Red Square in Moscow, from the land of the Brothers Grimm, from in front of the ovens at Dachau, from the Vatican, from near the leaning tower of Pisa, from the Colosseum in Rome, from the garden of Buckingham Palace, from the yard of the Tower of London and from a street in Amsterdam. Though I've not been to all these places, I feel as though I've touched history. Imagine the feet that walked on these stones...Jews walking to their death, a Pope, a Queen..... No souvenir hold so meaning as my little rock collection! |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Wow poet!! You ARE busy!! Great poem along with a great story. Yes, freedom is grand! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this Much!!!! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Amen, PdV...I could feel the power radiating off those rocks all the way over here in reading this. Michael |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
It was a great day in Europe when the Wall fell. I remember it well. : ) Thanks for writing this. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"Plain gray stones...". Think not. Thank you very much for sharing this. I am certainly glad there are no stones between me and this site. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
PDV: I'll have to send you a piece of this little rock...:-) HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Freedom ROCKS for Veterans.... |
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H. Arlequin Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 210 |
HA applauds! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
PvD, Did you know that every rock is an altar. Wonderful tribute. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
PdV, that's quite the collection. Where do you keep them all? Great poem and thanks for the reminder! That was a GREAT day!!! |
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