Open Poetry #4 |
In this Shell I hear |
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
In this Shell I hear Seagulls circle, wings beating with wave’s thunder. Echoes in my heart. Rhythm on the rock a conductor to a chorus an old man fishing sweet and ageless, the world wide sea side symphony and a choir of far off children’s voices. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie, this one sure brings a waterfall of emotion tumbling down my memory banks. Hanging on my wall is a picture of a lithe little nymph ... seashell to her ear ... listening ... listening. Hearing all she wants to hear. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I just caught the scent of sea air and heard the gentle sigh of waves - absolutely beautiful Martie! [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 11-18-1999).] |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Martie! My favorite spot in the world! ------------------ Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
There's something about the rhythms of the ocean that is mesmerizing, as is this poem Elizabeth |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Yes, a choir of children's voices would be perfect for this setting. Beautiful. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Agree with all the above. Very good. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This brings back beautiful memories |
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