Open Poetry #4 |
This Day |
Sunshine
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This Day Today I will take one word And thus make it sing; Today I will free one bird And help give it wing; Today I will smile at you And allow you to be; Today I will laugh with you And pray you laugh with me. Today I will cherish all things Just because they are here; Today I will give of myself, Because I hold me dear; Today I will face my fear And fly straight in its face; Today I will hold you close And be nourished from your embrace. Today I will do, and be, my best And know if I fail, I tried, the test. And tomorrow, I will begin again. 18 November, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Beautiful, Sunshine. How could we do any better? ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Allright Sunshine. Let it shine! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You do shine, Sunshine! Very lovely sentiments! ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Terrific, Sunshine. If only everyone felt that way the world would be a much better place. Thank you. |
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Sunshine
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Ohme, there is still much more we can do... Martie...shining on! denise, thank you! 'Deer, everyone could, so hope prevails! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, With this poem you have lit the way for all of us. Excellent |
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Sunshine
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Sy, I hope to be a light to someone today, and in the hereafter, wherever that may be for any and every one. I've made just enough mistakes in my past, all I want to do is rid myself of them in the best way I've always known, but failed to follow. Hopefully, I will end up being a good lesson to others. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Shine on Sunshine! You are an example for all! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is wonderful, Sunshine... one day at a time! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You can see from your answers that you are much loved. Do not look for forgiveness the only forgiveness you need is to yourself. Once you have done that you are free. *L* |
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Sunshine
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Pepper, suthern, Sy...thanks! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine ... I hope you know that we all hold you dear. And this poem is a statement of your strength and hope. Well done. Just begun. Each day the shining of your sun. Sent to warm another's heart, words of wisom you impart. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Sunshine...you're a true inspiration! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Veyr beautiful Sunshine....do take a bow for this one. BRAVO!!! |
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Sunshine
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Marge, thank you very much... Julie, your four words inspire me on... Hoot, praise from you is worthy. I'm curtsying... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I should just print this one out and tuck it in my wallet - so I think I will. Words to guide us through the day, Sunshiney Sunshine. Very well written. xoxoxo A |
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AlCowie Member
since 2011-05-13
Posts 92London, UK |
In a word "If" This poem would make a lovely basis for a lesson |
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