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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
sexy sleek strong strutting legs exclamation pointed by red leather spike heels accentuated with the short swirls of a skirt soliciting looks of appreciation and low soft whistles by those too entranced to care who hears eliciting raised eyebrows knowing looks and clucks of disapproval by those not daring enough to cause the commotion ------------------ ©1999 Iloveit |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very nice erotic poetry dear....and it describes Balladeer so well..... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL @ describing Balladeer... Great poem, Lovey! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
good to see you 2 (makes twice today for one of you  ), thanks for the compliment but ummmm Balladeer wears red high heels???? seems I am confused lolol....hugs and I gotta run, was just in for a min today [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 11-12-1999).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent Imagery in this one...nicely written |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You think you're confused? Me, too, unless both of those jokers think I am sleek and sexy. Suthern may do so but, if Toe tries anything, I'll beat him to death with my high heel! The poem is excellent, smooth and effective. I can just picture you, er, her. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
And dangit Bal, she stole your pumps....you can borrow mine. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Lovey - this one all very very erotic bit of prose - you are truly hot - Toe - ROFLMAO@Deer in heels - you are pure classic, and that comment says it all - |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
ROFG@beat him with my high heel..... thanks all |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Provoking self-portrait ... Nicely done Lovey ... |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
who said it was a self portratit *g* lol, oh yeah I forget...*you* know me  hugs and thanks [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 11-15-1999).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm glad you linked to this... I'm smiling at the memories, HFG! *S* |
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