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a flower called "iloveyounot"
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a flower called "iloveyounot" |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
a flower called iloveyounot young hearts race, never heeding advice vows exchanged, curtains hung, a family started, young love, he loves me. but I ask, what is love? my days are filled, love is hate and hate is anger and did you know the sun doesn't shine on the angry? what is love and is there a flower called the "i love you not"? closed heart, closed curtains anger, and years of hurt, you held others and i, knowing, plucking petals as i walked in your footsteps loved another too. irreparable damage done. but shall i go back and change a thing? no, had i not stepped, i would have never known real love my heart forever changed. ------------------ ©1999 Iloveit |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Iloveit: So true my friend...I'm not sure about a flower called "I love you not" but there's certainly once called "No going back once love has gone"..  Big husg my friend, well written.. ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
wow you couldn't have put it more perfectly than that....you got any seeds for that one????? big hugs |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
As with all things in nature, that flower requires two things, one seed and water...Not one person alone can ruin a relationship. I am elated at your expression though sorry for your loss. At least you know that the love you have would not have been except for the love you lost. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Iloveit: As RS said so well, there's nothing worse than when your thirst can't be quenched...now please don't have visions of me sitting here with my tongue hanging out..*g*...so unladylike...ROFL HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well RG I didn't before you put one there and now that's all I can see...lolol and wow, now I can understand why you were out standing in the rain in your last poem... and in fact there's the ocean mentioned in another of yours.....sheesh girl you better attend to that thirst of yours ROFG and RS, very beautifully stated, thank you  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, geesh... can I turn the hose on RG? Can I hunh? Please??? Thoughts of the water droplets glistening in the sun and creating rainbows beat thoughts of her sitting there panting! LOL. I like the curtain analogy, Lovey... Well done! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
ROFG yep the thought of you dousing RG with water and seeing rainbows glinting off of her sure beats that panting vision she left me with lol thanks suthern, and hugs |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
You guys are TOO much...ROFL As poor little me shivers away...*g* HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
As always, lady, your words are filled with emotion and stirring. Consider me stirred. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yea, Like Ball-a-deer said....I'm stirred to....but you've always "stirred" me yanno?....Nicely done gal..... |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
made rg shiver and "stirred" balladeer and toe? *gleam in her eye* lol I musta done something right..... now if only someone could point out just what it was so I could do it again *g* thanks guys :-) [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 11-18-1999).] |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Lovey, I don't know your past but I can see the present ... you've definitely become a lovely flower |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
*smiles* thanks JTF....means much coming form you, you know? |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Emotional words! That's stirred not shaken hehe...I was "stirred" as well! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
So sad my friend. I've liked this from the first time I saw it. |
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