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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 1999-11-10 10:08 PM


(just an idea that came to me on the plane watching the lay of the land below)
Topography

soft rolling hills
deep valleys
sharp angles
accented by smooth curves
each new plain
each rising peak
awakens my senses
as my hands and lips
map out
my final destination
on your body

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)


[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 11-10-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
Marilyn
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1 posted 1999-11-10 10:16 PM


Lovely piece Ruth. Beautiful imagery.
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 1999-11-10 10:31 PM


Hoot,
It would be nice if you could elaborate.
hehehe.

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 1999-11-11 12:26 PM


Marilyn...thank you

Seymore...let your imagination figure it out

LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
4 posted 1999-11-11 12:29 PM


Hootessa

A terrific way of moving from one perpective to the next... now... where was it you were flying??? My curiosity is killing me.

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 1999-11-11 12:36 PM


Long John, thank you...I'm glad you enjoyed and so you don't die on me here...California and my first flight to boot all the way from Central Pennsylvania

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

Balladeer
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6 posted 1999-11-11 03:33 PM


Wow! The landing would be spectacular!
moonmoon
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7 posted 1999-11-11 03:41 PM


Lovely indeed Hoot..
H. Arlequin
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8 posted 1999-11-19 08:03 PM


HA applauds!!
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 1999-11-19 08:07 PM


HA...where are you digging all these up from
Thank you

WhtDove
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10 posted 1999-11-19 09:20 PM


Hoot I'm sorry I laughed at this one! Loved the end girlfriend, didn't expect that one! hehehehe
Well, you know don't ya? Why I laughed?

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