Open Poetry #4 |
Three Sides To Every Coin.... repost from #1 |
Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
High in the sky Spinning round and round The odds are even When it hits the ground Heads you win Tails you lose The rules are simple You just have to choose Now nobody picked Double ought green So when it landed on edge It caused quite a scene With no victor declared No one knew what to do Some one cried "Call it a draw" They just flipped it anew |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Very interesting perspective to an old cliche Sir Andrew. Well written as well. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
There is so much philosophy that can come from this little poem but I won't torture you all with the agony of my thought. I shall just flip anew to the next poem. Excellent in form and content, as always, Andrew. Michael |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Interesting. A new view for me to ponder. Thank you for this thought provoking piece. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Thank you Lady Marilyn, glad you found it such. Michael, feel free to throw your philo about anytime. But I agree... there is alot to be read into this. RSE: Glad to provide a window with a different view. Thanks for looking in. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Pretty flippin' good, Andrew, as always! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Sir Balladeer... right back at cha! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hehe - liked this. Although it is deep, I had to laugh as I imagined stunned expressions on the faces of the flippers! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Severn: Ya, I know what you mean... makes me laugh too. I always sort of invision two football teams at the beginning of the superbowl, ready to wage war on one another, when this happens. Imagine the war there would be if they did call it a draw. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This gave me a chuckle! I'm too tired right now to wax philosophical, though...in fact I'm always too tired for that! Great poem, Andrew! It is great to have you back! ------------------ Denise |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Andrew if I must.....I have to know....you know me.....this is really bothering me quite a bit.....Did heads face away from or was it towards the flipper or was it towards the flippee?? I must know!!!! good poem my friend....lots said there. Robert ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thought Provoking Sir Andrew |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Lady D and Hoot: Thanks for looking in. Always a pleasure to see your marks. RobertB: The Flipper was North... Flippee was South... and Heads? I understand it was facing East. Tails was in the West of course where all the cheer leaders were. It figures. |
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