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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Yesterday I saw you yesterday. Caught a glimpse of your face, As I watched my reflection In the ripples of a pond. I heard you yesterday. While walking through the forest, I heard your voice In the rustle of the leaves on the trees. I felt you yesterday. Felt your touch on my skin, As the warm rays of the sun Lovingly caressed it. I may not have been with you yesterday; But I saw you, heard you, felt you, As I do everyday, In all that I do. ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Lovely, Hoot. Know the feeling.  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Lovely Hoot....... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hoot - Really pretty words that paint a picture hard to forget. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
So nice....I know the feeling too, for both those I love and hate.... ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
To feel the presence of important people in our lives although they are far away and then to write about it so well in a beautiful poem, you have done both. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, beautiful, Ruth. Very touching. ------------------ Denise |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful!!! Ruth ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
What to say? It touched my heart, stirred emotions, painted a picture. What more can one ask of poetry. I enjoyed the read, thanks. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ohme,Marge, Systematic, Denise, Martie, Pepper and Dark Angel...thank you all Gunslinger...I feel honered, thank you ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Hoot...this is absolutely lovely...I love the sentiments in this. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
So true, when we love someone, we carry them with us always. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, Ruth, as long as you didn't see his face in the pool while looking at the scum, then that's a good thing. hehe Your poem and sentiments, by the way, are beautiful. |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
I've learned that it's not a good idea to read your poetry one right after the other, for some reason it brings tears to me. Tears of joy ( when you found sam) sadness (veterans day) and now I don't know why I'm crying. love your poetry...walk with your head high knowing you've made a difference in someones life. |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Beautiful Ruth...each time I read one I look forward to the next. ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
You paint a vivid picture. I know this feeling. I've written of it myself. The reader feels the absolute passion. Excellent piece -RS ------------------ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sigh... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Lady Hoot: Thanks for this pictures in my head and the poetry well said. Very beautiful indeed. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Ruth your heart must have ten thousand colors in it, for such beautiful things spill out...lovely piece, this is ------------------ Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
I felt you in the breath of breeze upon my skin -- in the embrace of the night's loving arms who whispers dreams of you into my soul; I tasted of your kiss In drops of summer rain: the only fount to quench my thirsty heart. Sorry -- this really moved me, as you can tell. Inspiring. --Kess ------------------ You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WOw, thank you everyone, I didn't expect so much response from this one Kess...why are you appologizing, that is absolutely beautiful and I love it when my work moves someone. I can think of no higher compliment anyone can pay me. Thank you so much Ruth ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
Thanks Ruth, for allowing me to see your world though your eye's, and allowing me too experience how you feel, it was wonderful, and I enjoyed it!!!!!!!!! |
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