Open Poetry #4 |
Not a simple fact... |
mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
My heart is in pain for the words I ought to say for breaking up it's not a simple fact of life. Not knowing what to do I try to hide the truth for breaking up is not a simple fact of life Wish I could be wrong but the truth is oh so clear I could stay and sacrifice but LOVE is more than that And time will only prove That pain is so much more if I decide to hide and give it another try So hear the words that speak facts rather than doubts and try to understand a not so simple fact of life. ------------------ mcestrada |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
It's not a simple fact of all mc. but still it's a fact of life. I want to share this with you "if love was a dove set it free..if it comes back it was meant to be." Sometimes letting go is the only solution to a problem. My heart goes out to yours. I know the pain you're going through. Hang on my dear friend..soon it will all be a memory. ------------------ miriam coronado |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
mc, when the pain goes away and you are left with nothing but memories, keep only the ones you treasure. Toss everything else out the window! ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
mc, I can only agree with Miriam, If love was meant be then it will be. Good poem. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Nothing about love is simple mc - it takes strength to navigate its channels - and a good ability to swim when the boat is over turned! Keep writing my new friend, it is a great way to express...lovely poem. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Love when it's good is wonderful. But when things go wrong, it's the most painful feeling in the world. I like your poem! Welcome to the family! |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Thank you all for making me feel welcome!! ------------------ mcestrada |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice poem! I enjoyed reading this! ------------------ Denise |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Most of the times is very hard to let go, I'm having a very tough time going through this. I just don't want to hurt or ending hurting myself... Thank you all for your warm thoughts. ------------------ mcestrada |
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