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mc
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since 1999-11-16
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México

0 posted 1999-11-18 02:28 AM


Fly away my little child...
go in peace
forever dream
There's a place for you to be...

Count no more the stars,
they're for you to reach!!
just let your soul in peace
and give your heart dismiss.

Shed your tears,
and let THEM know
the rain will come
and you'll be gone.

So fly away
my little thing,
don't look back
and fade away!!!







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mcestrada

[This message has been edited by mc (edited 11-18-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Maricarmen Estrada Elosúa - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-11-18 07:17 PM


This is gorgeous mc! Just gorgeous. Big
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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2 posted 1999-11-18 09:27 PM


This is sooooooooo beautiful!

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Denise


mc
Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67
México
3 posted 1999-11-22 08:36 PM


I'm certanly glad you liked it!!!!!
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