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Morning rain
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Morning rain |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I'm mood to sing a song, Grab your coat And let's walk in the rain, Early morning rain makes feels like I'm in heaven, Knowing you, Loving words, Whispering into my ears, Laughing voice, Through the heart beats, Next to your body, Warm and loving tender words from you, Early morning rain, Let you hold me, Don't let me go, Till it melts away, Take my soul, Take my heart, Take me to the highest mountains I wanted to climb And shout I love you, The echoes I hear comes through the woods, Far from the places I go, Knowing the years soon holds my breath away, Walking in the sun, Morning rain, That's why I need to look upon them, Let the past leave the pain behind, Holding and laughing, Gentle,knowing the words I need from is just loving me, |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I really like this Vandana - it has a carefree, gentle feeling. One note - I wasn't sure of the 4th line - makes feels?  |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I think I like this one best of all Vandana. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you all  |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
ahh..This is beautifully done! It reminds me of how long it took me to appreciate mornings and rain...perhaps it took too long, but at least I can enjoy them now! enjoyed! I am many. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
liked this one |
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