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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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a single pen pilot of my dreams soars me through an endless landscape of never-ending inking out portals of potential transporting to fields of possibilities structured hope -lined- on an -empty soul- present wonders of "what if's... and "why's?" read as such is fantasy just that? -or- are there futures left to be explored? - - < !signature--> "When I find all of the reasons maybe I'll find another way find another day with all the changing seasons of my life maybe I'll get it right next time..." Estranged Guns 'N' Roses [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 12-18-1999).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Great piece, Christopher. "Structured Hope" - that's an awesome line. Wish I had thought that one up. I have wandered right along with you there my friend. Good job. Michael |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Nice going, I really enjoyed this one. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Great piece Chris. Can anything in this life truely be structured though? Enjoy reading your work my friend.  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I admire your way with words, sir! Spare in number but oh, so magnificient in meaning! I love this Chris!  |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
My, my...Chris I do love your work  There are always futures left to be explored, yes?I, too, like the line "Structured hope..." Excellent It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Interesting oddities we have here my friend. Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© ------------------------------------------------------- "Either kill me or take me as I am, because I'll be damned if I ever change..." Count Donatien Alphonse Francois de Sade (Marquis de Sade) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
And each line is a meaning unto itself, while connecting to a greater whole - always loved how you could do that. Fine fine verse, Chris. K |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like this one Chris...well done |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
What an interesting look at fantasy -- surely it is the vault where we keep our secret desires, and thus contains those things we strive toward ... As to whether we will attain them? Depends on the fantasy and the dreamer -- the will he or she has to see the dream through. Thank you for sharing this, and making me wonder. --Kess You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You've very adeptly presented some good questions here, Christopher.... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I loved the line, "...pilot of my dreams..." Exquisite piece here Chris! I love the way your thoughts just flow out, and run down the page.....makes reading it so interesting....You certainly have a way with expressing yourself....I applaude you! **Bravo !! - - - If I can just touch you once, then I feel I have accomplished what I am called to do...- - pFF |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I liked this very much, the structure, the way it flowed, the thought behind it--well done Christopher. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Chris always more future to be explored. Loved it! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Michael- Often I have noticed that we wander the same paths my friend! Sey- Hey, thanx for dropping a line! Marilyn- I have a firm belief that my life is chaotically structured! Sharon- You're making me blush!  Caroline- When there are no longer futures left to explore, place my corpse in a shallow grave! I agree, there are always futures to explore! Scott- That's me, my friend. Kamla- Thanx! I try my best, though it's often not enough. And when it is, it is often in the wrong direction. Shrug, what can I do then? Ruth- HUGS my friend! Kess- My ability to write is all that allows me to accept this world and my place in it! T'were it not for that, I feel I would long since have given up. It is only through my words and my rhyme that I can leave this place of pain for one of my own design. Nan- Thanks to you as well, now if you come up with any answers, please feel free to share them! Gen- Thanks! That was my favorite line too!  Martie- Thanks for taking the time to read and reply! My thoughts are often confusing, I'm glad you could understand them! Becca- Explore away my friend, the path lies through your imagination! |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Hey there Michael, I really loved this piece - well done! P.S. I loved your signature quote too. I think that " Estranged" is an absolutely beautifully written song. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Other than saying I really enjoyed reading this several times,others have said it all  So aptly done Christopher Jenny Lee |
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patchoulipumpkin Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 196Bermuda |
I really enjoyed this, it is defintely "poetic". Interesting your quote from Guns N'Roses, the forgotten band. Thanks. |
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Oscar Wilde Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 31San Francisco |
You can explore in my future! Great poem. Your biggest fan, O. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Just doing some re-reading - isn't it amazing what the context of time can do?  K |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wonder the same |
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