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The Unfinished Letter
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The Unfinished Letter |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
My Dearest One, I miss you as the stars would miss the skies, as candy would miss the caress of children's hands. I long to hold you and look deep into your eyes and see the love that radiates there from your heart. My presious one, I need to feel your arms enfolding me, the touch that shelters me from all of sorrow's pain. With every breath I take I feel my heart beating like a drum counting the moments until you return. If I could feel your lips upon by brow and on my cheek then I would lay me down and dream in perfect sleep. I love you so............. Forgive me Love, there's someone at the door. ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? [This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 11-16-1999).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is great, Ohme. Reminds me of "My love for you is higher than the mountains, deeper than the oceans, stronger than a magic spell...and I'll be over tomorrow if it doesn't rain". Good poem. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Oh, Balladeer, you are certainly no romantic. If I should ever write such a letter, I would hope the message could be delivered personally as soon as the door was opened!! But of course, ....happens too. LOL  ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? [This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 11-16-1999).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ohme ... I just KNEW he was at the door. I was running to open it for you. It's just perfectly romantic. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Ohme! Love the ending! ------------------ Denise |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Marge, It's something that can happen if dreams come true. Thanks for the reply. Denise, it's one of those poems that you have to finish in your own mind. In my mind I wanted to believe. Thanks for the remark.------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Balladeer is no romantic? Oh, the pain! I am wounded!!! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
LOL...story of my life...can you please hold. Thanks for the laugh...wonderful twist. Michael |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
ROFG@balladeer is no romantic, what a wound for a man with such a gift of words.....ROFG great poem Ohme, loved this, says so much. sometimes real life interrupts but I STILL miss him.....well done |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Oh, poor Balladeer, Ohme hurt his feelings. Let me pour healing salve on the wounds to heal the pain. LOLMichael, I started to finish the poem by stating why the letter was unfinished. Truth of the matter, I didn't even know! LOL could it be that sometimes what looks like true love isn't? ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Ohme, beautiful missing you type poem... ------------------ Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time. |
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