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Open Poetry #4

Til the last tear falls

JesiKa raBBit
Junior Member

since 1999-11-11

Posts 11
midland Texas USA

0 posted 1999-11-16 04:13 PM

I'll sit here and watch you walk away
all the time remembering how you say
you love me.
Of course I'm going to cry
why wouldn't I
because I gave my all.
But you on the other hand
you put forth a grain of sand
to show your love.
All the while I gave you my heart
and from you it wont part
because it loves you so.
I should have known it was to good
in my mind I know I should
have recognised the little sighns
of you showing me you wern't just mine.
And so now I sit here
forever wanting you near
and this I will do
untill I reach the last tear

[This message has been edited by JesiKa raBBit (edited 11-16-1999).]

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

1 posted 1999-11-16 05:10 PM

jessiKa, sometimes it's hard to know when the last tear has fallen. I felt the sorrow.
Love the last line!

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