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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-11-15 01:11 AM


they say this is venting
letting it all out
yet i dont feel like its gone
just builds up more
till the point
where i longer belong....
and i cry as i write
can you handle
that little bit of insight..
and i hate myself for weakness
shown through this all
id rather be the mystery..
the one you only think
you saw..



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Julie
Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
1 posted 1999-11-15 01:40 AM


Sometimes we just have to work it out within ourselves don't we Jackal. This piece has a lot of truth.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-11-15 09:43 AM


Venting is not a sign of weakness, it can give us strength
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