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Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

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Ala bam a

0 posted 1999-11-12 03:18 PM

It was a beautiful sunset,
Against a mountain view,
Beauty uncomparable,
Romantically shared by two.

It wasn't thier first encounter,
They'd loved so much before,
Each time better than the other,
Who could ask for more?

Their bodies lovingly entertwined,
Now "one" in love together,
As the sunset went down in color,
Their love consumated forever.

Their commitments sealed in romance,
Their love is never ending,
A marriage and honeymoon in Hawaii,
A new life together beginning.

It's such a touching love song,
One that should endure,
Nothing could come between them,
Good luck LongJohn and Balladeer!

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

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Somewhere near the Rainbow

1 posted 1999-11-12 03:24 PM

Somehow I knew there had to be a twist there somewhere. Good one, really enjoyed.

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

2 posted 1999-11-12 03:31 PM

Warning to all who read this sad poem by that scalawag - he is not to be believed - he is a dirty rotten rascal and a bane to us all. Toerag is a rascal and should never be believed.

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

3 posted 1999-11-12 03:32 PM

Warning to all who read this sad poem by that scalawag - he is not to be believed - he is a dirty rotten rascal and a bane to us all. Toerag is a rascal and should never be believed.

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

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Redlands,CA,USA

4 posted 1999-11-12 03:39 PM

Me thinks the Long One protests too much with the double post, but then Toe can drive one to extreams.

Toe... This was looking real good... and I thought "WOW! We're going to make it through to the end."... and then! WHAM! BAM! THANK YOU MAM!... I guess I held those expectations to high.

Now if I can just wipe the image clean from my wet-ware.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

5 posted 1999-11-12 03:39 PM

Gee, Toe... giving away his secrets like that got Long John so upset he's hiccuping! LOL.

Such a touching, romantic story... when the thought of touching makes me cringe! LOL. Thanks for the grins, sweets...

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

6 posted 1999-11-12 03:41 PM

If you stop reading before the last stanza this is a beautiful poem..shows a depth of feeling and excellent use of imagery. I like it....then he punch line...ok...but I really like your serious stuff too....(are your feet on that chair again?)

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

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Ala bam a

7 posted 1999-11-12 03:43 PM

why ms. devine....To what do you refer?....LOL

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

8 posted 1999-11-12 03:44 PM

What double post?

What double post?

suthern

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Louisiana

9 posted 1999-11-12 03:48 PM

I just realized... it's Friday and the sailor has been at Hooters all day (leaving Bal and those divine red pumps all alone *G*) Maybe that explains PART of the double posting! LOL

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

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Ontario, Canada

10 posted 1999-11-12 04:05 PM

Oh my...such a lovely love story..then the punch line and I can not get the awlful thought out of my head! *LOL*. I hope you too have a very happy life together.

Great job Toe...wasn't sure if I should have been looking for a punch line in this or not...lol.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

11 posted 1999-11-12 04:40 PM

I knew this love story was too perfect to be true. Where did that bone come from? The funny one I mean, were you born with it?

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

12 posted 1999-11-12 04:43 PM

martie - NO! He wasn't born WITH it - he IS it - lol

Lorelei54
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since 1999-07-27

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13 posted 1999-11-12 04:43 PM

Suthern, you got the Hooters and friday part right, I told him at 3pm to stay at work till he got sober, because 1, he was not safe to drive and 2, I'm not in the mood to put up with him, feeling a little under the weather, I'm sure he will just sleep it off when he gets home..LOL

[This message has been edited by Lorelei54 (edited 11-12-1999).]

Toerag
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Ala bam a

14 posted 1999-11-12 04:45 PM

Lorelei...I hope you feel better soon sweetheart...LJA, I hope you puke all night!
Have a great weekend all....I'm outta here, but will swing by tomorrow morning to say howdie if any of you are around....g'nite.

Balladeer

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15 posted 1999-11-12 06:23 PM

Marilyn, YOU can't get that awful thought out of your head?

and, Martie, never ask Toe about his bone! Trust me.

Toe, this is your comeback? This? Oh, well, I guess you gotta work with what you got. liemonging bum!!! LOL

Denise

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16 posted 1999-11-12 08:00 PM

You fooled me too! I thought this was going to one of your serious ones! Well, it's still lovely (most of it) and with a funny twist!

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Denise

stuart
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since 1999-11-05

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Cincinnati, OH

17 posted 1999-11-12 08:24 PM

Thanks Toe, (LOL) What a great read! LOL
Go get em guys

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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Glen Hope, PA USA

18 posted 1999-11-12 08:35 PM

Toe, I knew this was too wonderfully serious and romantic to be you....caught me at the end

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

19 posted 1999-11-13 10:14 AM

Lor: I hope you feel better soon... though with what you have to put up with (shaking head) *G*

ROFLMAO @ Deer's awful thought!!!! Hehehehehe

Ohme
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since 1999-07-17

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Texas

20 posted 1999-11-13 10:55 AM

I knew I could count on ya Toe.

See, that's another belly laugh. ROFL And today, I needed it!

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I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day!

Toerag
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Ala bam a

21 posted 1999-11-13 12:16 PM

Thanks for all the replies you "real" artists offered.....For some reason, it's so easy to write love poetry about this couple?...The words just seem to flow into my fingers....they are a lovely couple, fine folks, and deserve each other....

Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

22 posted 1999-11-15 09:42 AM

ROFG thanks for the smiles this morning

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