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An Interlude to Remember
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An Interlude to Remember |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
An Interlude To Remember Though I would dwell amid the love that beckons from your eyes, as I would bask beneath the sun that warms the summer skies. Let me not drink a toast of all the tears that I would shed remembering an unkind word from anything you said. Abide with me this interlude and let our time unfold then as you speak, I'll listen and your thoughts I will behold. But if the interlude should pass, I'm left with only time, I will not think these precious thoughts are nothing more than mine. ------------------ Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more? |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Ohme, this is really beautiful, I love the way it flows.  ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I liked the way you worked towards the ending..I could feel it coming!! ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very beautiful Ohme |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
I agree, this is truly a beautiful poem. |
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